Awesome trick. I don’t see voice tutorials all that often nowadays so this was nice. You could find a backdrop that makes the string more visible (This is rather nit picky though). Most importantly I would slow down the trick in the breakdown. It’s great that you did the entire trick in slow motion, and I think it would make the trick easier to comprehend if you utilize slow motion in the breakdown.
I also like the “pause” between elements you use to explain the next bit of the trick.
Your mic sounds great so there won’t be any problems understanding what your saying.
I love finding crazy creative tricks that have in-depth tutorials, (like this tutorial) so I’d like to see more of this. Any tricks are cool, I would do tutorials for tricks YOU want to do tutorials for.
Overall sweet trick! Just make the transition between elements better (and maybe be even show them at different angles if your feeling saucy), and your good ;D
tl;dr mark gud trick make gud tutorial get m0ni
Edit: fixed stupid amount of Grammer errors.