YoYoExpert - Official Contest - #1

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/087-master-superman.html

Suppose to be you're not your.

Correction:
As you come back around what you’re going to do is actually

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/084-expert-double-suicide.html

Changed might of to might have

Correction:
You might have seen that loop open up a little bit more.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/078-expert-hook.html

Spelled important wrong

Correction:
so I felt that it was important that you learn that stuff.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/078-expert-hook.html

Changed me to my

Correction:
Taking my throw hand and whipping it towards my fingers, you want to create that loop.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/069-expert-drop-in-the-bucket-via-jade.html

Fixed "Drop int he bucket" to Drop in the bucket.

Correction:
We're going to work on the "Drop in the bucket" mount again.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/068-expert-thumb-grind-transfer.html

Fix "Theres different variations" to There are different variations.

Correction
There are different variations; you'll notice I hooked it in between my thumb.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/068-expert-thumb-grind-transfer.html

Change ones to one is

Correction:
That's when you take your other hand and place it kind of a switch move as this one is coming out you twist your thumb this way and bring this thumb into here like that.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/067-expert-gyroscopic-flop.html

its is possessive. Changed it from it's to its

Correction:
and by pulling the yo-yo will change its axis

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/015-basic-flying-saucer-ufo.html

Added e to th to form the word the

Correction:
That's one of the really important things to UFO and one of the reasons people get frustrated with it.

[Rice]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/054-advanced-iron-whip.html

Added r to you to make your.

Correction:
when you whip you want your hand to look like this.

[Kim-Lan]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/201-offstring-overview.html

Spelled Diabolo wrong

Correction:
A lot of people relate this to be something called diabolo, which looks like a really big yoyo, two sticks and a string that people throw up into the air.

Original: So, we're going to talk about off string play.
Correction: So, we're going to talk to you about Offstring play.

Original: I wanted to actually show you what it looks like first.
Correction: I wanted to actually show you what it looked like first.

Original: So, what's an off string yoyo?
Correction: So, what's an Offstring yo-yo?

Original: As we mentioned before, it's not connected to the string to throw it you actually wrap it right around the axle like so.
Correction: As we mentioned before, it's not connected to the string. To throw it you actually wrap it right around the axle like so.

Original: I'm going to show how to do that, a little more elaborately in a minute.
Correction: I'm going to show how to do that a little more elaborately in a minute.

Original: It's just sitting on a string like so.
Correction: It's just sitting on the string like so.

Original: I can still spin it around like you were doing other tricks, but there is definitely a lot more you can do with it, because of that, so. Once again, you can actually throw it up and whip it into the air.
Correction: I can still spin it around like you were doing other tricks, but there is definitely a lot more you can do with it, because of that. So, once again, you can actually throw it up and whip it into the air.

Original: There are lots of different tricks they're doing over the legs, over the arms.
Correction: There's lots of different tricks they're doing over the legs, over the arms.

Original: That's the basics of off string and then you can still get it back to your hand.
Correction: That's the basics of Offstring and then you can still get it back to your hand.

Original: A lot of people relate this to be something called diablo, which looks like a really big yoyo, two sticks and a string that people throw up into the air. I don't know--whatnot.
Correction: A lot of people relate this to something called Diabolo, which looks like a really big yo-yo, two sticks, and a string that people throw up into the air and whatnot.

Original: So, it kinda developed off of that.
Correction: So, it kinda developed off that.

Original: There are a lot of tricks that are similar, but in the past three to four years, off string has taken off, and there are tricks you just wouldn't believe.
Correction: There's a lot of tricks that are similar, but in the past three to four years, Offstring has taken off, and there's tricks you just wouldn't believe.

[Kim-Lan]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/084-expert-double-suicide.html

Changed might of to might have

Correction:
You might have seen that loop open up a little bit more.

Original: Alright, we're on the last trick of the expert level, this is double suicide.
Correction: Alright, we're on the last trick of the expert level. This is Double Suicide.

Original: But it's funny, it's one of those tricks that you may not get every time, even I won't hit it every time but I like, so I threw it in here.
Correction: But it's funny, it's one of those tricks that you may not get every time, even I won't hit it every time, but I like it, so I threw it in here.

Original: Make sure you can do suicide first, go watch that suicide video, we're throwing that loop over and catching that loop that's created, make sure you can at least do that a couple of times.
Correction: Make sure you can do Suicide first. Go watch that Suicide video. We were throwing that loop over and catching that loop that's created. Make sure you can at least do that a couple times.

Original: Double suicide, what you're actually doing is hitting the yo-yo on the string, you're creating an extra loop to fly around kind of.
Correction: Double suicide. What you're actually doing is hitting the yo-yo on the string. You're creating an extra loop to fly around kind of.

Original: Looks like this as it hits this and it comes over you're creating a loop, but it comes around twice, it shoots around really fast which requires you to catch it really fast.
Correction: Looks like this. As it hits this and it comes over, you're creating a loop, but it comes around twice. It shoots around really fast, which requires you to catch it really fast.

Original: So, watch now as I hit, you'll see the loop come around, it's coming around really fast and it shoots around, you'll catch it just like that.
Correction: So, watch now as I hit, you'll see the loop coming around. That's coming around really fast and it shoots around. You'll catch it just like that.

Original: As I come around I hit this string with my pointer finger, I'll push down on that and that pops the yo-yo up into the air a little more creating that loop which it shoots right around.
Correction: As I come around and hit this string with my pointer finger, I'll push down on it and that pops the yo-yo up into the air a little more, creating that loop which just shoots right around.

Original: It's really hard, like I said even I have a hard time hitting it. Sometimes practice, it's just a double on like that, it comes around twice and you catch it with your fingers just like so.
Correction: It's really hard, like I said even I have a hard time hitting it sometimes. Practice. It's just a double on like that. It comes around twice and you catch it with your finger just like so.

Original: That's double suicide.
Correction: That's Double Suicide.

[Kim-Lan]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/055-advanced-laceration.html
correction

That's going to create that loop and that's what eventually what you stick your finger into when you?re learning the trick.

That's going to create that loop and that's what eventually what you stick your finger into when you're learning the trick.

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/055-advanced-laceration.html
correction
It's Laceration.

Its Laceration.

Original: If you ever get into the world of yo-yoing and you meet other yo-yo players and stuff like this, it can be confusing what the trick is because a lot of people misinterpret it and what not.
Correction: If you ever get into the world of yo-yoing and you meet other yo-yo players and stuff like this, it can be confusing what the trick is because a lot of people misinterpret it and whatnot.

Original: Your taking the string with your hand and whipping it into the gap and in midair a loop forms that you put your finger into.
Correction: You're taking the string with your hand and whipping it into the gap. And in midair, a loop forms that you put your finger into.

Original: See that loop that is created there, that is the loop that you want to hit.
Correction: See that loop that is created there? That is the loop that you want to hit.

Original: It's a cool looking trick it kind of looks magical the way the loop forms.
Correction: It's a cool looking trick. It kind of looks magical the way the loop forms.

Original: That's going to create that loop and that's what eventually what you stick your finger into when you?re learning the trick.
Correction: That's going to create that loop and that's what eventually you stick your finger into when you're learning the trick.

Original: The more motion you make this way, the larger the loop is going be because you will have more string hitting into the gap.
Correction: The more motion you make this way, the larger the loop is going to be because you will have more string hitting into the gap.

Original: If you string is too tight your loop is going to come out and it's going to be too small to hit.
Correction: If you string is too tight, your loop is going to come out and it's going to be too small to hit.

Original: My strings actually a little bit too tight right now, my loops aren't forming perfectly.
Correction: My string's actually a little bit too tight right now. My loops aren't forming perfectly.

Original: Practice that, it's a good trick, it's cool looking.
Correction: Practice that. It's a good trick. It's cool looking.

[Kim-Lan]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/015-basic-flying-saucer-ufo.html

Added e to th to form the word the

Correction:
That's one of the really important things to UFO and one of the reasons people get frustrated with it.

Original: If you throw it to the left it's going to loosen your string.
Correction: If you throw it to the left, it's going to loosen your string.

Original: UFO is actually a really good way to fix that.
Correction: And UFO is actually a really good way to fix that.

Original: Let me show you real quick what it looks like.
Corrrection: So, let me show you real quick what it looks like.

Original: It shoots around like so, you brag the string, and you toss it up to your hand.
Correction: It shoots around like so, you grab the string, and you toss it up to your hand.

Original: That was to the right and this one is to the left.
Correction: So that was to the right and this one is to the left.

Original: When I throw is to the right, you'll notice if I hold it there for a while, that string is being tightened around the yo-yo. You'll see I've got this is what we call spaghetti string.
Correction: When I throw it to the right, you'll notice if I hold it there for a while, that string is being tightened around the yo-yo and you'll see I've got-this is what we call spaghetti string.

Original: To get out of it, I'll see if my yo-yo doesn't get knots. Do a UFO to the left.
Correction: And to get out of it-I'll see if my yo-yo doesn't get knots-do a UFO to the left.

Original: This is actually loosening the string up.
Correction: And this is actually loosening the string.

Original: You'll notice when I pull it's not nearly as tight as it was before.
Correction: And you'll notice when I pull, it's not nearly as tight as it was before.

Original: To do it, you hold the yo-yo sideways just like do.
Correction: So to do it, you hold the yo-yo sideways just like so.

Original: Hold it sideways like so, get a really strong throw, bring your hand up and across.
Correction: Hold it sideways like so. Get a really strong throw. Bring your hand up and across.

Original: After you throw, you take your hand and bring the cross like so.
Correction: After you throw, you take your hand and bring it across like so.

Original: To throw it to the right, you throw hard, grab the string, and toss up.
Correction: So to throw it to the right, you throw hard, grab the string, and toss up.

Original: It's from this position to this position. You're going to throw the yo-yo this way.
Correction: So it's from this position to this position and you're going to throw the yo-yo this way.

Original: If you do one UFO to the right, one UFO to the left, it's going to keep your yo-yo from getting to tight or too loose.
Correction: If you do one UFO to the right, one UFO to the left, it's going to keep your yo-yo from getting too tight or too loose.

[Kim-Lan]

http://yoyoexpert.com/learn/031-advanced-strong-throw.html
correction
So when you throw its kind of going back to the sleeper it sounds kind of silly for me to go back to that trick but practice your sleeper.

So when you throw its kind of going back to the sleeper it sounds somewhat silly for me to go back to that trick but practice your sleeper.

So when you throw its kind of going back to the sleeper it sounds kind of silly for me to go back to that trick but practice your sleeper.

The second one was incorrect. Also, on the same video, here:

You want it to be able to land on string without shooting back at your hand it's really important.

You want it to be able to land the string without it shooting back to your hand, it's really important.

Original: Okay we're moving on to advanced tricks, the intermediate tricks are okay but the advance tricks are where the main style I'll play today.
Correction: Okay, we're moving on to advanced tricks. The intermediate tricks are okay, but the advanced tricks is where the main style of play is today.

Original: If you go to a contest the tricks I'm going to be teaching you are tricks actually people are doing a lot. They are freestyle performances you need a really long sleeping area you want to have a yo-yo to spend at the end of the string for a long period of time.
Correction: When you go to a contest, the tricks I'm going to be teaching you are actually tricks people are doing a lot in their freestyle performances. You need a really long sleeping yo-yo. You want your yo-yo to be able to spin at the end of the string for long periods of time.

Original: You want it to be able to land on string without shooting back at your hand it's really important.
Correction: And you want it to be able to land on the string without shooting back at your hand. It's really important.

Original: So when you throw it's kind of going back to the sleeper it sounds kind of silly for me to go back to that trick but practice your sleeper.
Correction: So when you throw, it's kind of like going back to the Sleeper. It sounds kind of silly for me to go back to that trick, but practice your Sleeper.

Original: It's really important so I dealt with a lot of people that are trying to learn advanced tricks and one of their main problems is that they're just not throwing it hard enough.
Correction: Get this really important, because I've dealt with a lot of people that are trying to learn advanced tricks and one of their main problems is that they're just not throwing hard enough.

Original: So when you throw start with a really strong throw and you really want to snap that wrist, watch me stop my yo-yo hand will literally snap straight out and snap.
Correction: So when you throw, start with a really strong throw and you really want to snap that wrist. Watch me snap. My yo-yo hand will just literally snap straight out and stop.

Original: That gives me an incredible long throw, this yo-yo is going to spend for a couple of minutes easily.
Correction: And that gives me an incredible long throw. This yo-yo is going to spend for a couple of minutes, easily.

Original: A lot of the yo-yo's that are out here today actually can spend 4-5 minutes easily the longest spinning yo-yo was actually upwards to 16 minutes. Right now not necessarily for using string tricks it looks more like a drive scope just the way it's all shape and everything, but they will spend for incredible long time.
Correction: A lot of the yo-yos that are out here today actually can spin 4-5 minutes easily. The longest spinning yo-yo was actually upwards of 16 minutes right now. Not necessarily for using string tricks, it looks more like a gyroscope the way it's all shaped and everything, but they'll spin an incredibly long time.

Original: It's really important when you're doing string tricks that you get that strong throw because when you start playing tricks it's going to be a lot easier to maneuver around and do your moves if your yo-yo is continuously spinning the whole way through, so practice that strong throw, get it good and we're going to move onto advanced yo-yo tricks.
Correction: It's really important when you're doing string tricks that you get that strong throw, because when you start learning tricks, it's going to be a lot easier to maneuver around and do your moves if your yo-yo continually is spinning the whole way through. So practice that strong throw. Get it good and we're going to move on into advanced yo-yo tricks.